“Muhammad Ali then and now” by Dick Schaap tells the tale of the great Ali and puts his opinions in but lknot in depth. EB White says that you need to include more of your opinions rather that just telling about his life. It’s a writers duty to include his opinion if not, its not an essay. All Dick does is tell about Ali and his life, he doesn’t have much of his opinion in it. EB White is the real writer, he knows it all.
Monday, May 7, 2012
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I disagree with this opinion because this response doesn't really say whether Ali changed for better or for worse. This response just talks about how the author didn't include his opinion, when the response really should have included the response writer's opinion. In order to improve this response, try to include your opinion and how you believe Ali changed through out his life.
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